Alec S.
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« Reply #4 on: May 29, 2016, 03:49:19 PM » |
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Played through it, here are some notes:
-The jump could use a bit of tweaking. Maybe give it a bit more air-time. Also, give the player a different animation when they're in the air, as well as a jumping sound effect. -The player's hitbox seems to be a bit bigger than the sprite, so I tried to make a jump from the side underneath a platform, and hit the platform. -In level 4, when the player presses the button, the platform immediately starts moving away from them. It should start a bit further away and move towards them so that there's time to catch it immediately after pressing the button, so that, if the player acts quickly, they don't have to wait for the platform to slowly come back. -The end-level portal should be more clearly visible in the bottom half of the screen -If you can, try to find a font that doesn't have anti-aliasing on it, as it looks bad at that level of zoom (the grey edges around the text) -The plus and minus balls also changing your position is a bit confusing. Although I guess it leads to some interesting puzzles. -I'd want to see less of the early levels (a lot of the levels between 1 and 10 seemed to more be tutorials than actual puzzles) and more level's like 11-16. -Which platforms can become moving platforms should be more visibly apparent. As should the buttons which stay pressed and the buttons which are only pressed when something is on them (they should be green and blue or red, rather than dark green and light green)
Anyway, not a bad start. The reflected platforming mechanic is something I've seen many times before, but you bring some new twists to it and some pretty clever puzzles.
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