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« on: February 08, 2017, 05:36:45 PM »

Hi guys. Im making a game about being a cashier in shop. And the problem is im not from US and im not sure is my text out of mistakes. Please correct my text:

"Shop –°ashier Simulator - you are cashier at small town shop. You have mad boss, citizens with no patience and you must change that.
Sell goods, take money, give back change. Feel the real cashier situations.
But remember - your shop's boss mad at everyone.
Forget big supermarkets and cash-free payments, its not intersting.
Become an ace of old cash register profession!!
Important gameplay note! - The goods must be delivered in a order which people ask for."
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« Reply #1 on: June 27, 2017, 09:30:02 AM »

Here are my changes:

"Shop –°ashier Simulator - you are a cashier at a small town shop. You have an angry boss, citizens with no patience, and you must change that.
Sell goods, take money, and give back change. Experience real cashier situations.
But remember - your shop's manager is mad at everyone.
Forget big supermarkets and cash-free payments; we're not concerned with that.
Become an ace of the old cash register profession!!
Important gameplay note: The goods must be delivered in the order in which people ask."

Hope this helps!
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