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[Exec]

Hello everyone!

As in thread I need some critique of my mockup:



Im planning to make some RPG style game where you control child characters dressing up like wariors etc. Im plannig make job system where every job would have different dressing/ skills etc everything in childchood style.

What do Y guys think? Its reedable? Haow about colors and characters? Thanks for help!:)

[ndnninja15]

I like it especially cause the style is unique and not just another Chrono trigger final fantasy whatever look alike.

I think the HUD mixes too well with the rest of the stuff though. Maybe try to make it pop a little more.

Same with the characters, just a little bit more.

[Exec]

Thanks for help!:), I try do something with hud, maby Y have soem ideas?

[kurisuchian]

I really like the feel of the colors. The characters are contrasted well with the background. Can't wait till you finish that game. I really like it.   

[redredred]

The UI is pretty readable. Well done!

[i.i]

Lookin' good!

Also, uploading a 2x or 3x version of the screenshot could be super helpful!