It's a nice start, and the melody you have so far is good, but it's really a bit short to critique further without knowing what you're going for. If you could tell us a bit more about what you're trying to achieve with this music and what your game is about, then we might be able to give you better feedback!
Also, as an aside, I recommend that you reduce the size of your profile image to 100x100, it's so big that it's making your post quite a bit taller than it should normally be. Not your fault, profile image uploading is quite wonky right now and guidelines aren't easily accessible, but I thought I'd mention it since you probably don't want to inflate the size of every thread you post in
Edit: I also would advise against creating new threads for each piece of music you want critique on. Instead, please post in
this one, or at the very least keep all your tracks in one thread from now on.
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