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zekabroa
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« on: July 23, 2019, 02:42:12 AM »

Hey, I've been developing this game with a friend and would love some feedback, it's about checking tickets on a train, we have plans to add a back story to the main gameplay loop if it proves to have some fun element to it
appreciate you checking out the game.




Download it here.

https://zekabroa.itch.io/trainchecker
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« Reply #1 on: July 25, 2019, 07:30:05 AM »

Hey, i tested your game and here's some Feedback:

The gameplay was very short but it showed the very core: Click on People and check if they have a ticket. If they dont have one, kick 'em. It... kinda reminded me of Papers, Please from the Style (i could be wrong) but thats not a bad thing.

Things i would personally like if you could go with another mechanic, that you really have to check the tickets - under timely pressure - and stamp them or sell tickets (people approach = sell normal prize, people seen driving without ticket, higher price?).

So, you have to check different kinds of tickets. Monthly Tickets, Weekly Tickets, Day-Tickets, One-Way Tickets and so on. What i am saying, basically, this could be a 'Papers, Please' but with Train Tickets and less catastrophic events ^^

But: Keep the vision of your game and develope it that way. At the end, i am just a random stranger on the webz.

Stay crunchy.
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« Reply #2 on: July 29, 2019, 12:02:40 PM »

Hey thanks alot for the feedback
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« Reply #3 on: August 03, 2019, 05:49:16 PM »

Hey Zekabroa,

I played your game.  I recorded it and my thoughts:


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« Reply #4 on: September 30, 2019, 05:02:05 AM »

Wow thanks alot for the video feedback and sorry for the late response
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