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« on: September 19, 2019, 11:27:54 AM »

Hello! Please help us improve our game Between Realms. We think that maybe we made some mistakes while picking the color palette for landscapes and premises. What do you think about it?









Big thanks for your support!
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« Reply #1 on: September 20, 2019, 09:57:26 AM »

Cyrex is very important part of Between Realms plot. It’s a very powerful source of energy which, since been discovered, had changed the life of humanity. The ORUM complex, where the game action takes place, is the only place where Cyrex is mined, so the importance of this facility for the Earth inhabitants cannot be overrated. Cyrex itself plays no less important role in the game's storyline, sometimes being a helper and sometimes an enemy. What you see on the attached picture are the Cyrex cores - portable power units which will be used during the most important missions in the game. Please rate the quality of graphics on the picture and the power units design. Did we do it all right?

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« Reply #2 on: September 22, 2019, 06:50:48 AM »

I love your game it looks really polished. I think the problem isn't really the colour pallet (It's not crazy stylized but it works), the main issue I see is that the objects have contrast in the wrong places. It's a bit difficult to figure out where I'm meant to be looking at.
For the first image the trees stick out way too much, consider making them more pale or just a bit darker than the grass (it doesn't really make sense for dark green forest trees with dead dry grass). If the building itself is run down, make it more dusty coloured with like the rocks and ground around it. Then pick some section of the building you want to highlight and give them more colour (blue would go well with it's theme)

The third image does this great, the glow is bright and adds some colour to more washout background.

For the forth image I understand that you are trying to get us to focus on the big tower in the background but the the dark area in bottom left with the detailed structures really distracts from it. Consider making the tower or sections of it a darker colour.

Overall I just think the assets need to blend a bit better together and choose carefully as to where you add contrast.
Dispite that everything here looks extremely high quality, nice job.
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« Reply #3 on: September 24, 2019, 05:36:06 AM »

Overall I just think the assets need to blend a bit better together and choose carefully as to where you add contrast.
Dispite that everything here looks extremely high quality, nice job.

Thanks a lot for your feedback, dear friend! We'll consider everything you've mentioned, and will do better! Keep in touch! \m/
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« Reply #4 on: September 24, 2019, 05:48:50 AM »

This is the Cybernet - basic enemy unit from Between Realms. The Cybernets are robots, intended to serve inhabitants of ORUM - the technological complex where the heroine finds herself during the events of the game. There are thousands of them in ORUM, but… now they are not friendly at all. Somebody reprogrammed the network that controls the Cybernets, and the robots turned into the ruthless murderers. They kill many of their former masters and are eager to kill Eve too, each time when they see her. Let me ask you, please, to evaluate the model.



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« Reply #5 on: September 26, 2019, 10:13:33 AM »

Hello! Let me introduce to you Mr. Sam Rise - one of the characters from upcoming action/adventure game Between Realms (UE 4). Sam is the elder brother of game’s protagonist Eve, and the main driving force behind the plot. The picture you see is a frame of flashback animation that would be implemented in the game in a form of comics. How can you evaluate the character and the drawing style?



Any feedback would be very useful  Smiley

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« Reply #6 on: September 27, 2019, 07:40:03 AM »

Hello! Let me show you the video of animated model of Miss Eve Rise from the game Between Realms. The team is now polishing the game, so any feedback will be very useful. Please tell your opinion about the model and motion.



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« Reply #7 on: September 27, 2019, 06:59:04 PM »

This is all still being written in the language of promotion. If you're looking for a place to show off your work, I feel like you'd be better served by creating a Devlog thread, or maybe in Townhall if your game is close to completion.
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« Reply #8 on: September 28, 2019, 11:06:44 PM »

This is all still being written in the language of promotion. If you're looking for a place to show off your work, I feel like you'd be better served by creating a Devlog thread, or maybe in Townhall if your game is close to completion.

Sorry, sir. Perhaps you may tell how to write the posts to make them not look like promotion? I'll create the devlog, of course.
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« Reply #9 on: September 29, 2019, 07:27:33 AM »

This is all still being written in the language of promotion. If you're looking for a place to show off your work, I feel like you'd be better served by creating a Devlog thread, or maybe in Townhall if your game is close to completion.

Sorry, sir. Perhaps you may tell how to write the posts to make them not look like promotion? I'll create the devlog, of course.

It's not really a big deal, mostly just a matter of forum organization. Everything you've posted here seems pretty well polished, and isn't the sort of thing that's usually posted when seeking feedback, unless there are specific things about it that you're trying to improve. For general feedback or just getting people to see your game, you'll probably get more of the type of response you want in a devlog.
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« Reply #10 on: September 29, 2019, 10:24:52 PM »

Everything you've posted here seems pretty well polished, and isn't the sort of thing that's usually posted when seeking feedback

But we are really seeking for feedback. The game is not completed, even not close to the final stage, and we even don't know by now, how we are going to sell it. So, the main goal we are here, is the feedback, still)
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« Reply #11 on: September 30, 2019, 06:02:53 AM »

No worries, then. Keep up the good work!
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