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TIGSource ForumsCommunityTownhall[Vertical Slice Trailer] for Rave Horror game Strobophagia. Impressions welcome
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« on: September 27, 2019, 05:46:57 PM »

Hello!
Me and my small indie game studio have just released a new trailer for our Rave Horror game Strobophagia. It is set in an impossible forest, akin to a Lost Woods of sorts. You will be able to explore our trippy forest rave later this Autumn, when our vertical slice is released into the wild.

I was hoping to get some impressions and thoughts about our trailer or the game itself, so please watch and tell me what you think.





Cheers! Coffee
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« Reply #1 on: October 01, 2019, 03:09:34 PM »

Looks trippy! Can't say I have seen anything like this ever. Some random nitpicky thoughts:
- the text on the mobile phone looks blurry
- the tree on the right side of the title screen looks like its another letter making it hard to read the game title
- I think the beginning of the trailer is a bit slow. I would probably have jumped directly into the parts after the hand is cut off and have that at the end instead (after the title potentially even)

Good job overall!
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« Reply #2 on: October 02, 2019, 11:32:48 AM »

Thanks for the feedback! I don't mind if the feedback is nitpicky, it still shows me things that can improve Smiley

Cheers!  Coffee
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