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[Papacubec]

Hi devs!
My demo is ready and I don't know what  text I should show whane player open this demo ?

I need some template english text

google - said nothing ...

 pls help me, friends!

[ThemsAllTook]

I don't quite follow the question - what's the gist of what you want the text to communicate? Thread title says "disclaimer"; disclaimer for what aspect of your demo?

(I'll probably want to move this thread to Design or Business, but I can't tell which category would be appropriate without more information)

[Papacubec]

I am talking about the thing you see when you fire up a demo something like .... "this is a demo....... it does not reflect the quality of the final product" etc

[ThemsAllTook]

Gotcha. Let's go with Design, then.

"This is a demo. It does not reflect the quality of the final product." seems like fine wording to me, if that's what you're looking to communicate. Personally, I wouldn't have had a specific expectation for this to be the thing I see when I fire up a demo. You can communicate anything you want to your audience! There's no one rigid pattern to follow; you always have the freedom to decide all aspects of how you present your creative work. It's completely up to you.

[TonyLi]

Always add a call to action, such as a button to wishlist the game on Steam, join discord, sign up for the newsletter, etc.

[Papacubec]

Look, my English is not very good. I wrote like this text

Hello
This is a demo version of the Rushout game and does not claim to be a finished final product.
All copyrights reserved.

Not all functions work in this version
Only 4 types of weapons can be used
The hero has only 1 ability (slowdown)

There are 2 levels available for you to get acquainted with the game.
Also, the hero will have a partner-hint to help in full version of the game.


Add to Wishlist on Steam (link)

Write your feedback and bug reports to Discord (link)

Thank you

[TonyLi]

Looks good! Maybe the last line could be:

Share your feedback and bug reports on Discord (link)

[Papacubec]

thanks firend!!!