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« Reply #40 on: October 27, 2009, 12:38:56 PM » |
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I find that the music goes pretty well with the tiles/world you've created. The music is peaceful even if it's a bit generic. I could see myself playing that game!
The enemy animation is very nice but I feel that the smoke cloud on landing is a bit "strong".
Actually now that I think about it, the song does match with the tiles. How odd. Perhaps I was too harsh in my criticisms then. At least, about my comments of the direction or theme of the song anyway. |
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« Reply #41 on: October 27, 2009, 02:28:58 PM » |
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Do tile variations help?  I think I'll do something similar with the ground. that's it! |
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« Reply #42 on: October 28, 2009, 07:31:16 AM » |
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 Are these any good for ground variations? |
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« Reply #43 on: October 28, 2009, 07:43:58 AM » |
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I think so, yeah.
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« Reply #44 on: October 28, 2009, 09:28:03 AM » |
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For the music, I'm not really sure what kind of volume to go for; is this too quiet? http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/421763/Assemblee/3pre.mp3(If it sounds the same volume clear your cache) |
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easynam
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« Reply #45 on: October 28, 2009, 12:36:47 PM » |
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 Working on more tiles and stuff. Any problems so far? |
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« Reply #46 on: October 28, 2009, 01:28:57 PM » |
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Looks pretty good to me. Are those mushrooms intended to be a part of the foreground?
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« Reply #47 on: October 28, 2009, 01:54:31 PM » |
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Yes.
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« Reply #48 on: October 28, 2009, 03:09:59 PM » |
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Looks nice.
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« Reply #49 on: October 28, 2009, 05:14:57 PM » |
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 Should I switch so curvy trees? EDIT:  Also thinking about making the inner leaf tile be lighter like this4 EDIT: Or maybe just have it as a variation like with the ground. |
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« Reply #50 on: October 28, 2009, 05:23:27 PM » |
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nah, i liked the weird rectangular look. was very distinct.
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« Reply #51 on: October 28, 2009, 05:27:03 PM » |
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what about switching the center tile?  |
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« Reply #52 on: October 28, 2009, 05:28:20 PM » |
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It all looks pretty neat, though in that forest pic, it's a bit hard to discern back and foreground.
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« Reply #53 on: October 28, 2009, 05:29:44 PM » |
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I think you should stick with the old ones. They just look better (well, to my eyes anyway).
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« Reply #54 on: October 28, 2009, 06:25:16 PM » |
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I think you should stick with the old ones. They just look better (well, to my eyes anyway).
yeah, i thought it was fine like this |
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« Reply #55 on: October 28, 2009, 06:41:46 PM » |
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The background needs to be a lot darker than the foreground. Give it some contrast. Right now my eyes can't tell which is the foreground and which is the background. It's kinda jarring.
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« Reply #56 on: October 29, 2009, 09:33:52 AM » |
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That big landscape last page is still a little hard on the eyes. Maybe use a less neon shade of green and some colors with softer contrast?
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« Reply #58 on: October 29, 2009, 01:08:56 PM » |
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You inspired me   Hahaha, awesome! |
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« Reply #59 on: October 29, 2009, 02:16:10 PM » |
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