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[Techpriest]

Hehe say what i need to improve

[konjak]

Detail is what you need to improve.

This is basically what an artist's layout sketch might look like. I can't really tell what much of it is, save for the statue.

Hate to be a jerk, but still. 

[JaJitsu]

creativity? the pic is kind of boring.

[Robotwo]

needs more rainbows 

[Nate Kling]

blending.  Your colors don't blend.  There aren't enough colors.  Turn the opacity down on your brush to get some quick blending.  Also, you have the road as brown and the rocks as grey.  In real life thats not how they are, look at a picture, every object you draw has lots of colors in it. Make sure to look at pictures to draw or paint from or at least use them as reference.

[moi]

shadowing and composition

[Dave Matney]

And more depth... Shading, probably.

<-- Not an artist.

[Techpriest]

So i need to work one detalis, shadows, blending and composing.
I will se if i can draw up something for this weekend for you

[mixzed]

Homework: Look into Perspective & 3 Dimensional Shapes. Define your vanishing point & light source before you start!

- The color change in the sky shouldn't be that drastic I can see the effect your trying to get but the sky isn't that dark when the sun is out. It would seem that your trying to get the effect of an early morning sky, throw some pink or peach in the mix with your light blue.

- The water, I see you've got a horizon line in there maybe you'd want to add an island or mountain in the distance to make it seem less "infinite". also mix up the blues in your water, it will keep it from looking too still.

- The land there is no sense in dimension here it looks flat and awkward  The person who is viewing this composition is expecting dimension & perspective due to how you laid everything out but they're not getting it and thats what makes everything awkward. I suggest you sketch out your lines first before painting. If your no good at sketching then I would start practicing that before painting.

Disclaimer: I'm not an art teacher or anything, I just love to draw

I apologize if I come off as a little brash.
I only mean to help you out.