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[Martin 2BAM]

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You wake up dreaming of her...
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While exploring the cavern searching for this girl
 you start exploring deeper into the inhabitant's lives,
 asking questions that will help you find her.

Can you do it?

(This is my LudumDare 16 entry)

Click here to play (Flash)





Click here to rate it (LD)


Best regards
-Martín

[Titch]

Never mind.

Played through the game. Had trouble following the story and the level felt too large with not enough to do. But...intriguing none the less.

[Martin 2BAM]

Yeah, it could have a deeper story... if I only had a team of artists and developers to make it happen in 2 days 

Thanks for finishing it

[Curseman]

Interesting method of storytelling.  My biggest problem was that I didn't see any logic or reason to who gives you which of the clues/images/memories in the starting "town" area.  I do like how the use of changes in the music and the protagonist's facial expression.  I'm going to go see if I can't find some more stuff in the game.

[Titch]

Yeah, it could have a deeper story... if I only had a team of artists and developers to make it happen in 2 days 

Thanks for finishing it

Well I know it's tough doing something over a short time. I think I just had high expectations after playing Caverns. I did like the core mechanic and the way you told the story, it was just too much time was given over to moving around a level where you weren't really clear where to go and that didn't have a huge amount of visual variety until the latter part of the game. Like you could have crunched the size down a bit and had less level design work to do and the game would have been better for it.

[Curseman]

Alright, I've found both endings.  I think that the way you portrayed the game's theme and the solution as part of the interface was clever.

So do you have any hints for this "secret" the game mentions?  Does it have anything to do with the fact that the pause screen says that you can press X to shoot, or is that just a mistake?  I'm guessing that you have to talk to someone in a later area while still having one of the early memories that you wouldn't normally have there.

Edit:

I think that the last scene you get for the "good" ending is a big of a letdown.  It'd just be nice to get a little bit more for solving it, you know?

[Martin 2BAM]

Hey, thanks for the effort man!
I'm glad you ended up watching both ends of the work.

The X shoots is a mistake (Flixel mode-modders will understand me )
It would be really clever what you propose for the secret but it's actually way simpler and doable always, without any kind of restriction.

About the second ending... yeah, I know. I want to do something better with it but time was a big factor there

Thanks again!

[mcc]

I had a lot of trouble understanding what things were in some way part of the game and which things were just bugs.

For example, sometimes when I talked to the "wrong" person it would result in them saying "...", sometimes I'd just press space and nothing would happen.

[Martin 2BAM]

Hi there, thanks for the feedback.

It can be confusing but "..." means they have no answer to that question. You only ask once each question to each character (actually each character type)

When you get new answers (that are in turn questions), you can then ask them those new ones to each character.

Regards

[raiten]

Eager to try it out but the game won't load for me (despiting reloading the page a couple of times). It's stuck at the loading screen, the loading bar is full but it won't progress beyond that.

[Martin 2BAM]

Just wait a whole minute. The flash file is just 3MB and the preloader is bugged. fixed.