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[JMickle]

Original - Edit

[thewojnartist]

That's a lot better! Here's some nitpicking on the eyes:

[JMickle]

That's a lot better! Here's some nitpicking on the eyes:

Thanks. I didn't actually change the eyes at all myself, I just moved them about a bit. Same with the mouth, which I really like, btw. It was only the shape of him that I thought was dodgy; he looks a bit cheekier and more gish-like now.

[Winterous]

Wicked *airguitar* :handmetalR:

[falsion]

That looks pretty cool. Dunno what else to add, I think he needs gums though. Here's the limited edition Gish plush toy for reference:

http://cache0.bigcartel.com/product_images/3050505/2.jpg

If you look closely, you can see them, colored in gray.

[Plasticware]

[thewojnartist]

Wow, JMickle and I just got owned!

Edit:
some nitpicking on the left (his right) eye:

[Eagle0600]

Actually, I don't like Plasticware's at all.

[falsion]

Yeah. He's usually depicted with his mouth open in all official artwork of him, so that's a lot closer actually.

Only thing is that his eyes and mouth need to be shifted a bit to the right. The perspective is slightly to the side but despite that, the face is directly in the middle.

EDIT: Here we go.



EDIT 2: Let's make him a little rounder too.

[thewojnartist]

Yeah. He's usually depicted with his mouth open in all official artwork of him, so that's a lot closer actually.

Only thing is that his eyes and mouth need to be shifted a bit to the right. The perspective is slightly to the side but despite that, the face is directly in the middle.

EDIT: Here we go.

To be honest, that sort of looks wierd. I liked it better before.

[falsion]

How about this? One row of teeth, Gish box art style.

[mokesmoe]

It looks like but more sad.

[Veo]

?

[Eagle0600]

That's much better. Honestly, up until Veo's edit, I thought all the derivatives of Plasticware's image were horrible. Just being honest.

Maybe a little more angle in the eyes?

[falsion]

That's much better. Honestly, up until Veo's edit, I thought all the derivatives of Plasticware's image were horrible. Just being honest.

Maybe a little more angle in the eyes?

Haha, sorry about that. I suck.

But yeah, that looks way better now. Maybe a bit too circular though, needs to be a little more flat towards the bottom.

[Winterous]

Maybe take elements of the better mouth onto the better portrait, and modify the shade a bit (looks better darker), but the pose and eyes on the first look significantly better.

[Eagle0600]

I like both the new pose and the old pose, but the new one is coloured better. Also, there's nothing wrong with Gish being round when he's jumping, as he clearly is in the second pose.

edit:
Colour edit.

For comparison:


edit2: Mouth nitpick.

[Winterous]

I like both the new pose and the old pose, but the new one is coloured better. Also, there's nothing wrong with Gish being round when he's jumping, as he clearly is in the second pose.

edit:
Colour edit.

For comparison:


edit2: Mouth nitpick.

Fantastic!
And we have our portrait lady and gentlemen!

I never suggested there was something wrong with him being round, it just looked wrong.

[JMickle]

this is by far the best. i didn't like the shape of his body on the new one, but yeah the colour was perfect.

[thewojnartist]

edit2: Mouth nitpick.

SWEEEEEEET.  

Edit: More mouth nitpicking. Tried to make it smoother on the left (his right).