Delmore
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haha dude i love indie games!!!
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« Reply #6100 on: September 15, 2009, 09:02:50 AM » |
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 I had the back leg looking better but MMF2 corrupted the game file so this was the latest I was able to restore back to. |
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« Reply #6101 on: September 15, 2009, 09:27:03 AM » |
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 Tried a walkcycle. |
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Nate Kling
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« Reply #6102 on: September 15, 2009, 09:54:13 AM » |
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Old man with a peg leg and two peg arms. This walk cycle is quite a challenge. I think its almost there. I almost gave up but I kept going.  |
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« Reply #6103 on: September 15, 2009, 09:57:35 AM » |
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Old man with a peg leg and two peg arms. This walk cycle is quite a challenge. I think its almost there. I almost gave up but I kept going. dude that's awesome. great work sticking with it!  |
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« Reply #6105 on: September 15, 2009, 10:49:49 AM » |
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that's just fantastic the face, and eyes specifically, are a bit clunky towards the end. i love it though |
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Kramlack
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« Reply #6106 on: September 15, 2009, 11:20:52 AM » |
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@Thernz: Thank you, that absolutely made my day. As well, I now want to have that Cheese Curry guy in as an Easter Egg, haha. :D
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MaloEspada
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« Reply #6107 on: September 15, 2009, 12:00:52 PM » |
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Last pages had amazing pixels everywhere!! I really love Kramlack's heart-machine gun sprite and easyname's green guy
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Robotwo
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I'm a complicated being after all
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« Reply #6108 on: September 15, 2009, 12:13:58 PM » |
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Man do I love japanese commercials :D |
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What we are is simply a stepping stone to what we can become
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Adam F.
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hold your head up high
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« Reply #6109 on: September 15, 2009, 01:17:04 PM » |
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I had the back leg looking better but MMF2 corrupted the game file so this was the latest I was able to restore back to. lookin' pretty boss. the back leg does look weird will the spastic shading changes, the changes could be smoother. hurry up and finish the head! @nessiah, I really love those rocks. they don't match the characters though D: @everyone else, lookin' spectacular!~ |
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« Reply #6110 on: September 15, 2009, 01:49:25 PM » |
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delmore- get wilder with your colours. with a few reservations standard grey is pretty bleh. some basic hue shifting would look great and more complex stuff could look incredible.
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Nessiah
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Today is a gift that's why it's called the present
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« Reply #6111 on: September 15, 2009, 02:00:50 PM » |
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Whoa I forgot the shadow underneath the grass  Also those characters are for my perspective guide I should've said that :< Ok I'll work on the grass to be...longer? or more wilder if it's is the correct term. |
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« Reply #6112 on: September 15, 2009, 02:09:35 PM » |
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Yes, wilder. Make more variations of the grass tile, so that some go deeper (or something) than others and etc. Maybe you can fit patches of grass in between some rock tiles here and there too. @Thernz: Thank you, that absolutely made my day. As well, I now want to have that Cheese Curry guy in as an Easter Egg, haha. :D
It's also a suggestion that you should play a sound similar to the ones emitted by this strange cheese-shooting figure whenever he shoots hearts. |
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KennEH!
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« Reply #6113 on: September 15, 2009, 03:11:04 PM » |
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With all that said, here it is:  Sweetness. |
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Madness takes its toll please have exact change.
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« Reply #6114 on: September 15, 2009, 05:33:00 PM » |
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I had the back leg looking better but MMF2 corrupted the game file so this was the latest I was able to restore back to. Ickybod Clay!!!  Is it sacrilege that it's not made of clay? |
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« Reply #6115 on: September 15, 2009, 05:43:46 PM » |
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A WIP :X  Wanted to know errors before I move on Aside from what others have said, I think the background is a bit too saturated. It kind of distracts from the characters. |
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« Reply #6116 on: September 16, 2009, 05:40:53 AM » |
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Aside from what the others have said: Those rocks are really, really good.
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Craig Stern
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« Reply #6117 on: September 16, 2009, 09:41:31 AM » |
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Yeah, I agree, that cliff face looks fabulous. Ha! I love this guy! :D The belly wobble is just icing on the cake. |
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« Reply #6118 on: September 16, 2009, 09:49:54 AM » |
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Yeah, the rocks are awsome, but I'd scale them up to 200% percent, the chunks seem so small in comparison to the characters. Colour-wise they're like ACE, the lightning looks a bit under-waterish. Is nice.
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Bones
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« Reply #6119 on: September 16, 2009, 09:56:52 AM » |
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Yeah, the rocks are awsome, but I'd scale them up to 200% percent.
This critique makes no sense to me. Why would he scale the rocks 2x? A WIP :X Wanted to know errors before I move on That grass is looking pretty square, quite un-natural. And the side is pretty repetitive. Rocks are pretty decent they seem they got the most attention. I don't know if it's just me but the layers of rock doesn't look convincing. Kind of looks like it's paper thin maybe try breaking the head on perspective.  I know it's not proper and looks kind of weird but I could see it being used well if done right. the trees are looking promising. |
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