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[Rat Casket]

Why does it have to be so freaking upscaled man?

Doesn't have to be. Just is.

[DustyDrake]

Alright, after down scaling it I tried my hand at editing it.
I think part of the problem with you having it hard to show him being depressed is that the mask is too 'aggressive'
Here's what I came up with (sorry for the lack of shading on the arms, I didn't know how you want it)

I flipped the eye upside down and lowered them and made them smaller, drooped the horns.
With the arms it looked like you wanted him slightly muscular based on the legs, hence the mass, and the hands are facing each other to convey a sense of "Oh, I give up..." or some other depressing phrase.

[Rat Casket]

I like it.

I wasn't sure if I should make the arms hang forward, or adjust his posture to make them hang back or something.

As for the mask, I don't want it to show much emotion. I just want it to be empty of emotion. Just a blank stare of sorts. Those horns are cool though.


Readjusted his posture a bit. Still can't figure out the arms for him. I may need to just recreate him a few times to see what all I can come up with.

[Angelbait]

Hey budd! 

Not sure how much oomph I will ever have with my art but I thought I might hop in here and give my two cents as well cause I REALLY like this character design!

So I was reading your descriptions of him and in this little edit I turned the body forward and shifted the head a little to compress the body into a more defeated feeling.  Than I drew a couple more arms on him for other variances to see!  Hope it helps even a little!  Happy to see more talent on this site!

[Rat Casket]

I like that first one a lot. Thanks man!