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« on: August 26, 2013, 08:55:07 AM »
Play it here.

This is story about perfectly normal job interview. I'd like some feedback.
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« Reply #1 on: August 26, 2013, 09:07:51 AM »
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« Reply #2 on: August 27, 2013, 04:26:02 AM »
Oops... Fixed link.
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« Reply #3 on: August 27, 2013, 03:28:52 PM »
Didn't know Pascal, Noooo!  Grin

nicely implemented, a few typos I noticed, but fun  Toast Left
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« Reply #4 on: August 27, 2013, 03:31:11 PM »
Yeah, sorry about them, I'm not native English speaker.
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« Reply #5 on: August 27, 2013, 03:33:36 PM »
 Smiley It's alright, I wouldn't have guessed that you aren't a native speaker, everything reads fluidly, and if I wasn't as meticulous as I am sometimes, I probably would've missed the typo(s).
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« Reply #6 on: August 28, 2013, 10:08:33 AM »
Kind of trippy until you spelled out the metaphor at the end.
Not bad for trying something new.
You've inspired me to try Twine out sometime.  I see its potential.
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« Reply #7 on: August 29, 2013, 07:04:53 AM »
Quote from: Meatsack on August 28, 2013, 10:08:33 AM
You've inspired me to try Twine out sometime.  I see its potential.

You certainly should! It's very easy to use - if you ever edited Wikipedia article, you'll feel right at home, as this program uses standard WikiCode, in fact it is based on little known software called TiddlyWiki (TW is used for game's "engine" part).

But you should use following version: https://groups.google.com/d/msg/tweecode/8hYb9W9NsIo/mgrUku0M1IAJ instead of one you can find via google, as Twine 1.3.5 has several bugs which this so-called alpha (so-called because is very stable and bug-free) eliminated.
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