J.W. Hendricks
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« Reply #200 on: February 24, 2009, 07:26:03 PM » |
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Those are lovely.
And sexy |
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The artist formally known as "Javet."
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shig
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« Reply #201 on: February 25, 2009, 07:56:35 AM » |
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Shouldn't every character have more than one hurt sprite?
Y'know, one for when he gets hit with a weak attack, and another for when he really gets hurt.
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Soulliard
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« Reply #202 on: February 25, 2009, 08:36:23 AM » |
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Weak attacks will be differentiated by not knocking the character back as much.
If there were multiple hit sprites, it would be better to have different sprites for different hit locations.
But that's something to worry about once we have more of the basic sprites done.
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« Reply #203 on: February 25, 2009, 03:58:31 PM » |
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More stuff for Indie Brawl: Perfect World Edition  |
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The-Imp
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« Reply #204 on: February 25, 2009, 04:10:18 PM » |
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Hey guys guess what? I'm working on the portrait.  |
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godsavant
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« Reply #205 on: February 25, 2009, 06:51:17 PM » |
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Good man.
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The-Imp
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« Reply #206 on: February 25, 2009, 07:22:04 PM » |
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I honestly think it's pretty bad, but I was working on between hours today, we had some people over.   |
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« Reply #207 on: February 25, 2009, 07:35:56 PM » |
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I honestly think it's pretty bad, but I was working on between hours today, we had some people over. That's pretty good for being done in a distracting environment, though! I'll let someone else nitpick it. I'm too sleepy and bothered mildly by other threads to do this without feeling like I'm being too harsh. The little space that's his head should be shaded darker and his left hand should probably show his thumb on the back of the gun, maybe |
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Rory
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« Reply #208 on: February 25, 2009, 08:07:43 PM » |
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Right on!
The gun needs to be quite a bit thicker.
And something about the eyes is bugging me, but I just can't pick it. Maybe because they're pure black?
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« Reply #209 on: February 25, 2009, 11:10:34 PM » |
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The shading on the neck looks kind of like a mouth.
Maybe make it a bit thicker?
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Soulliard
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« Reply #210 on: February 26, 2009, 10:55:47 AM » |
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The gun is tiny and the eyes are huge. It's a good start, but it will still need some changes. I like the bandanna, though.
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Rory
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« Reply #211 on: February 26, 2009, 01:02:31 PM » |
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I thought that was his mouth, but then I though, hold on, Liero doesn't have a mouth. But then I thought, in Liero, he doesn't even have eyes (I don't think, haven't played for a while), so a mouth would be kinda cool.
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« Reply #212 on: February 26, 2009, 01:44:08 PM » |
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Beep boop sprite update  |
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Rory
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« Reply #213 on: February 26, 2009, 06:03:58 PM » |
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THICKER!
Look at the sprites, the gun's nearly as thick as him!
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godsavant
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« Reply #214 on: February 26, 2009, 07:04:01 PM » |
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That, and you could probably just slim him down a few pixels on either side; he can be pretty lean, and plus, Naija proves that you don't have to do extreme close-ups to have a recognizable portrait.
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« Reply #215 on: March 02, 2009, 08:51:41 AM » |
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Yeah, he seems a little bit fat in the portrait. I think we could really orient ourselves at the concept art for the portrait too:  The gun might need to be moved a bit to the center get it into the portrait. Also, how the hell did that color change in my shooting animation happen?  I'll correct that sometime (hopefully soon).. |
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Soulliard
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« Reply #216 on: March 02, 2009, 02:42:32 PM » |
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I corrected it already.
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« Reply #217 on: March 15, 2009, 06:56:03 PM » |
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I just isolated one of the frames from my hurt animation:  Not satisfied, but i'm too tired to work on it right now. Also, i don't know if you caught this when I posted it a while back, but I recolored the Larpa firing animation to match the missile's smoke trail:  |
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J.W. Hendricks
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« Reply #218 on: March 15, 2009, 07:00:15 PM » |
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This might just be my vision, but you might want to move the explosion a little down and to the right by a few pixels. Nice lighting though!
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« Reply #219 on: March 15, 2009, 08:10:36 PM » |
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I agree. Especially since the barrel of the gun is the small lower part.
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